Hi my name is Mika. I'm from yaldhurst model school. The positive thing is that I really like your photo. But to make this better add some more information. My questions are, where were you? Did you win? What made it challenging for you? What was the best part of your day? From Mika
Hi josh you look like you are having fun. But next time you need to right a bit more because one sentence doesn't tell us much about the cross country.
Hi my name is Pavitra I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka school. Did you have fun at your cross country? This reminds me of the cross country I had at my school. Do you know how much you ran? Maybe next time but a little bit more information. Keep up the good work!
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Hi my name is Mika. I'm from yaldhurst model school. The positive thing is that I really like your photo. But to make this better add some more information. My questions are, where were you? Did you win? What made it challenging for you? What was the best part of your day? From Mika
ReplyDeleteHi josh
ReplyDeleteyou look like you are having fun. But next time you need to right a bit more because one sentence doesn't tell us much about the cross country.
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Hi Josh M,
ReplyDeleteI think you looked you were having fun.
A tip for you is to add more info to this post.
What place did you come ?
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Pavitra I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka school. Did you have fun at your cross country? This reminds me of the cross country I had at my school. Do you know how much you ran? Maybe next time but a little bit more information. Keep up the good work!
Visit my blog at: http://odspavitrap.blogspot.co.nz/